Tuesday, November 13, 2012

High and Lifted Up by Mike Krath



Fall Leaves Blowing In The Wind
Read the story below about a young boy's adventure.  In three to four sentences explain what you think the old leaf meant.  If you were Tommy which leaf would you have followed and why?

High and Lifted Up
It was a windy day.
     The mailman barely made it to the front door. When the door opened, Mrs. Pennington said, "hello", but, before she had a real chance to say "thank you", the mail blew out of the mailman's hands, into the house and the front door slammed in his face. Mrs. Pennington ran to pick up the mail.
     "Oh my," she said.
     Tommy was watching the shutters open and then shut, open and then shut.
     "Mom," he said, "may I go outside?"
     "Be careful," she said. "It's so windy today."
     Tommy crawled down from the window-seat and ran to the door. He opened it with a bang. The wind blew fiercely and snatched the newly recovered mail from Mrs. Pennington's hands and blew it even further into the house.
     "Oh my," she said again. Tommy ran outside and the door slammed shut.
     Outside, yellow, gold, and red leaves were leaping from swaying trees, landing on the roof, jumping off the roof, and then chasing one another down the street in tiny whirlwinds of merriment.
     Tommy watched in fascination.
     "If I was a leaf, I would fly clear across the world," Tommy thought and then ran out into the yard among the swirl of colors.
     Mrs. Pennington came to the front porch.
     "Tommy, I have your jacket. Please put it on."
     However, there was no Tommy in the front yard.
     "Tommy?"
     Tommy was a leaf. He was blowing down the street with the rest of his play-mates.
     A maple leaf came close-by, touched him and moved ahead. Tommy met him shortly, brushed against him, and moved further ahead. They swirled around and around, hit cars and poles, flew up into the air and then down again.
      "This is fun," Tommy thought.
     The maple leaf blew in front of him. It was bright red with well-defined veins. The sun-light shone through it giving it a brilliance never before seen by a little boy's eyes.
     "Where do you think we are going?" Tommy asked the leaf.
     "Does it matter?" the leaf replied. "Have fun. Life is short."
     "I beg to differ," an older leaf said suddenly coming beside them. "The journey may be short, but the end is the beginning."
     Tommy pondered this the best a leaf could ponder.
     "Where do we end up?"
     "If the wind blows you in that direction," the old leaf said, "you will end up in the city dump."
     "I don't want that," Tommy said.
     "If you are blown in that direction, you will fly high into the air and see things that no leaf has seen before."
     "Follow me to the city dump," the maple leaf said. "Most of my friends are there."
     The wind blew Tommy and the maple leaf along. Tommy thought of his choices. He wanted to continue to play.
     "Okay," Tommy said, "I will go with you to the dump."
     The winds shifted and Tommy and the leaf were blown in the direction of the city dump.
     The old leaf didn't follow. He was blown further down the block and suddenly lifted up high into the air.
     "Hey," he called out, "the sights up here. They are spectacular. Come and see."
 Tommy and the maple leaf ignored him.
     "I see something. I see the dump." The old leaf cried out. "I see smoke. Come up here. I see fire."
     "I see nothing," the maple leaf said.
     Tommy saw the fence that surrounded the city dump. He was happy to be with his friend. They would have fun in the dump.
     Suddenly, a car pulled up. It was Tommy's mom. Mrs. Pennington wasn't about to let her little boy run into the city dump.
     "Not so fast," she said getting out of the car. "You are not allowed to play in there. Don't you see the smoke?"
     Tommy watched the maple leaf blow against the wall and struggle to get over. He ran over to get it but was unable to reach it.
     Mrs. Pennington walked over and took the leaf. She put it in her pocket.
     "There," she said, "it will be safe until we get home."
     Tommy smiled, ran to the car and got in. He rolled down the back window and looked up into the sky. He wondered where the old leaf had gone. Perhaps one day he would see what the old leaf had seen - perhaps.

source: http://www.eastoftheweb.com/short-stories/UBooks/HighLift.shtml

28 comments:

  1. Juan Moncada 51

    i think the old leaf meant that you should follow your parents say. if i was that leaf i would follow my friend. i would follow my friends because mabey they would not go far.

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    1. You know the maple leaf is going to the dump. So is that really a better choice?

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    2. check your spelling dude.

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  2. Alex Pineda51
    The leaf that I would follow is the maple leaf because it would take me to the dump that I never gone to. So I would see what is in the dump and have an amazing adventure and explore what the people threw out and see what the people threw out and stuff.
    I think the old leaf meant the boy would get lost and would never find his way home from the dump to his house.

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  3. carlos reyes sec 53 I would follow a maple leaf . I would follow becase i would curious to see how far it goes. i would follow it were it ever it ent

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  4. I think the old lesf meant tell your parents first. dont go out by your slife. I would go with the maple leaf because it meat be telling me something. It meat show me new things that i have not seen. That would be a good adventure. Alexis fierros

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    1. Check your spelling. If you use Google Chrome to do your post it will underline words that are misspelled. Try and reread your posts to make sure that it makes sense. I like the second point you make about why you would follow the maple leaf.

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  5. i think the old leaf ment to tell your parents first.if you do go out yourself somthing can happen.i would follow a maple leaf because i would wonder how far it would go and also see what would happen to the leave as it goes on its '' little journey.''
    actully i would really do that if the leaf didnt go as far.

    betsaida cruz
    53

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  6. I would follow the maple leaf because it did make a good choice to go to a dump even though it was filthey and dirty.I would also follow the maple leaf because it picked to be with his friends where his friends are at a dump where it is dirty and nasty.
    daniela cruz 53

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    1. How did the leaf make a good choice by deciding to go to the dump? You did not answer all of the questions. Make sure you answer each question completely.

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  7. I think what the old leaf meant by "The journey may be short, but the end is the beginning" when he thinks that its the end it really is not its just a new start to learn more and have more fun.

    Tyrel Rucker
    Sec 51

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    1. Great point. I love how you included text support, but you did not respond to the whole blog.

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    2. I would of followed the old leaf because I would of wanted to see things from way up above. I would of not of wanted to go to the dump because it doesn't seem to be as fun as flying and seeing the sights of the town.

      Tyrel Rucker
      Sec 51

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  8. moises gonzalez51
    I think that the old leaf meant to tell him to tell his parents before he goes anywere.Because if something bad happend to him his mom would not know were he is and not only that his mom would not know what happend to him. If i was Tommy I would of followed the old leaf because I would be less in danger.

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    1. Both of the leaves were encouraging him to go for an adventure. Read the story carefully and think about what the old leaf meant.

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  9. I think that I would follow a leaf because you can see were they go & the bad part would be going to the DUMP to see were the leafs goes.-Litzy Rodriguez

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  10. Joshua reyes sec53 I think that the old leaf meant to tell his parents before he goes anywere . Because if something bad happend to him . if i was Tommy i would of followed the old leaf because i would be in less danger

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  12. Alexia Senchanthisai Sec53
    I believe that when the old leaf said "the journey may be short , but the end is the beginning "he was trying to say that life may be short ,but after we pass it is the start of a beautiful beginning were we can view all beautiful sights from above if we choose the right path.
    If I were Tommy I would follow the old leaf because I would want to stay away from danger and choose the right path in life.

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  13. I think the old leaf meant was " the end is the begginning and the adventure may be short. I would follow the old leaf becuase what happend in the story may not of happend maybe the boy could of gotten in danger but, at the same time i would like to follow the maple leaf because adventures are fun and I think the old leaf said ," I see smoke and fire ". So, good thing the boy's mom came because the boy may have been injered . FROM:Susana Hernandez

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  14. I think the old leaf meant to the little boy its no that great being a leaf. Also that you can get crushed by a lot of things. If I were Tommy I would have followed a pretty red leaf because I could have been free and happy. Also I would have had a lot of fun following a leaf because i would be on a adventure.-Sarah Salazar section53

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  15. Nicholas EALLEY 53 Why would the old leaf say that i think that old leaf wanted to tell the young leaf he dosent want to be a leaf.

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  16. Alyssa Maragh 51 a kid named Tommy followed a leaf.the leaf said life is to short so have fun.then he lost the leaf.then he said perhaps we will see the leaf again.that life is to short.

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  17. This story is really good

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  18. Explain as fully as you can what the old leaf means by ‘The journey may be short, but the end
    is the beginning.

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